One day after school, I went home and I was really bored. I decided to go on my brothers Chromebook and play games. I was really bored because I didn't know what game to play. I thought really hard and all of a sudden a thought struck me like lightning. I should play Agar.io, I thought. I opened up the agar.io game and started playing.
When I started I was really tiny. I started eating those little circles and got bigger. I ate and ate until I noticed that I could eat the other circles that move! I was chasing a moving circle and a bigger moving circle was chasing me. I ate the little circle and got bigger then suddenly the bigger circle split and ate me! "Noooooooo" I yelled. I was devastated.
I restarted the game and was determined to get bigger. After 5 minutes I was so slow and so big. I thought I was the man. All of a sudden I lagged and ran into a massive circle. I felt like screaming. I retried and retried. I kept playing for 1 hour straight. I think I was getting.... addicted.
I continued playing and before I knew it I was at the top of the leader board. I was extremely happy. I felt generous and decided to feed the smaller circles. I was still gigantic and I continued playing. I got bored because the game wasn't a challenge anymore. I gave my brothers Chromebook back to him and said "I bet you, you can't come first on Agar.io". He looked at me fiercely and replied "Game on".
Kat, you have done a great job recounting playing Agar for the first time! However, I would love to see you use figurative language somewhere in your essay.
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