Creative Writing Rough Draft

"Mum can I please go rugby training?" Tim says "No you have to stay home and do your chores." Mum replies "Rugby training is only like 3 hours then I can come home and do my chores." Tim says "No, you also have to watch Lisa because I want to go to your aunties house and no one will be here to look after her." Mum responds "Ughhh you're so annoying and I'm only thirteen and I can't even look after her!!" Yells Tim while storming out of the house.

“I hate my mum” says Tim to himself while he walks down an alley. While Tim was walking down the alley he spotted a cave. He walked inside the cave and saw a villain making a machine. He thought it was weird and creepy so he rushed out of the cave. While he ran out of the cave he kicked something and it made a really loud noise. The villain was coming so he decided to hide. The villain looked around for something and then turned around found Tim. The villain captured Tim and while he was tying him to the chair he told Tim “I’m going to destroy the world, hahaha and no one is there to stop me.” Tim replied “I can stop you”. The villain turned around and laughed “Hahaha you think you can stop me? Hahaha I would love to see you try, but first you do have to try and escape HAHAHA”. Tim struggled to get out and while he was struggling the villain left the cave.

The villain went to the highest building he could find and fired up his machine. Back at the cave Tim was thinking, thinking and struggling to escape. Finally Tim found a way to escape. He saw a knife and he leaned so his chair can drop on the floor. The knife was really close to his hands, he was reaching and reaching when finally he grabbed the knife and cut the rope. After he escaped he ran out of the cave to find the villain before it was too late. He ran around the streets looking and looking and then Boom! Tim almost got struck with lightning? In the middle of a beautiful sunny day? Tim thought. Tim looked up to figure out how he almost got struck with lightning but when he looked up he saw the villain laughing his head off. Tim rushed into the building and ran up to the top. He saw the villain looking down at all the poor citizens and tried to talk him out of destroying the world. “You don’t have to do this. You can live a happy live, you just have to turn off the machine.” said Tim. The villain pretended to be touched with the message that Tim was trying to say and he went to shut down his machine but lied and got a stick that was next to him and tried to kill Tim. Tim got knocked on the ground but then quickly got up and tackled the villain. Tim knocked the villain out and deactivated the machine. Tim grabbed the villain and ran away before the machine could blow up. Boom! Tim went down stairs and saw the news and the fire fighters. The firefighters ran inside to save the citizens in the building. The news started interviewing Tim and while they were talking Tim’s mum came to the building and started hugging Tim. “I’m so proud of you son.” said Katherine. Tim jumped into the car before the news reporters could ask anymore questions and Tim thought mum was taking him home. Mum pulled up at training and Tim was so happy. He looked at his mum and said “Thanks mum, but I think I deserve to go home and get cleaned up”. Katherine and Tim smiled before starting the car back up and then “So how did you defeat this villain? What was he trying to do? How did you know where he was? How did you know that machine was gonna hurt anyone?” “Really mum?” replied Tim “Hahaha just kidding”.