Lion and The Mouse

This is a paragraph I wrote in a group about the first paragraph.

The little grey Mouse got trapped in a dark cave. The fearsome lion was sleeping in the cave. The lion woke up and clapped his paw on the little grey Mouse. “Ahh.” Said the little grey Mouse. “Let me go Please let me go.” “Okay” said the fearsome lion. “But don’t come back here again.” “Thank you. But if you ever need some help call me. Bye.” Said the little Mouse.

Here is a picture too.